典型外贸开发信的写法

Dear Mr. Steven Hans,

We get your name and email address from your trade lead on www.tradelead.com that you are in the market for ball pen. We would like to introduce our company and products, hope that we may build business cooperation in the future.

We are factory specializing in the manufacture and export of ball pen for more than six years. We have profuse designs with series quality grade, and expressly, our price is very competitive because we are manufactory, we are the source. You are welcome to visit our website http://www.aaa.com which includes our company profiles, history and something latest designs.

Should any of these items be of interest to you, please let us know, We will be happy to give you details.

As a very active manufactures, we develop new designs nearly every month, If you have interest in it, it`s my pleasure to offer news to you regular.

Best regards,

Dafu Wong

请注意这封开发信的写法。作为初次联系的信件,它简洁明了,鲜明地展示了自己的特点:工厂、款式多、价格有竞争力,并暗示建议客户绕开中间商直接跟厂家合作。因为不知道客户的详情,特别强调有多种品质,这样无论对方是精品路线还是廉价路线,都有洽谈的空间。

此外,并没有谈论太深,而是引导客户去访问自己的网站。最后再抛出诱饵,以不断提供新款设计信息为由吸引客户回复,而客户一旦回复,就极可能确认了应该联系的人----要知道,你原先获得的名称地址很可能只是个打字员的。

这样的开发信,再随附一张展现琳琅满目款式的产品照片,效果会很不错的。

当然,开发信要自己写,而不要抄书或者网上那种固定的范文。古板雷同的文字只会让客户反感。况且产品种类不同,写法也不一样。工艺品还是日用消费品、时尚产品等不妨轻松活泼,而如果你卖的是阀门,那么还是严谨专业些比较好。

此外,开发信不同于Trade Lead,为表示诚意,不宜千篇一律,应该根据客户的规模、国籍不同略作调整,在信件中适合的地方自然地点一下客户的公司名字,暗示这封开发信是专门诚意写给贵公司的,而不是草率地广告。这些小技巧虽然不起眼,但颇能给客户以好感。

记住,能吸引客户回复的开发信,才是成功的开发信。

开发信,可以用传真的形式,但目前更多的是采用电子邮件方式。